Querying literary agents
How to Write a Novel Synopsis Agents Will Read
Writing a synopsis is one of the trickiest parts of the querying process, especially when you’re attached to your story and unsure how to condense it. It’s normal to feel stuck or overwhelmed by what to include and how to make your synopsis compelling yet clear.
Direct answer
Start by treating your synopsis as a story summary that hits the main plot points: introduce your protagonist, their goal, the central conflict, key obstacles, and the resolution. Keep it clear and straightforward, focusing on what drives the story forward rather than side plots or detailed backstory.
Aim for a third-person present tense summary, even if your novel is written differently. This helps agents quickly grasp the narrative without getting bogged down in style or voice. Generally, a synopsis runs 1-2 pages, so every sentence needs to earn its place by advancing the plot or revealing character stakes.
After drafting, read your synopsis aloud to check for clarity and flow. Cut anything that feels like filler or detours. If it still feels confusing or flat, try outlining your novel’s key events on index cards or a timeline to see the big picture before rewriting. Working with a coach or trusted reader can also provide valuable perspective to sharpen your synopsis.
What this looks like in practice
Early draft stage
You have a rough novel draft but no synopsis yet.
You’re unsure what the main plot points really are or how to summarize them.
You identify the central storyline and start a simple summary that highlights your protagonist’s journey.
Revision stage
You’ve written a draft synopsis but it feels confusing or too long.
Your synopsis includes too many side plots or lacks a clear narrative thread.
You trim and reorganize it to emphasize the main conflict and resolution, making it concise and compelling.
Before querying or publishing
You need a polished synopsis to send to agents or include with submissions.
Your synopsis feels flat or doesn’t clearly communicate your story’s stakes and unique elements.
You refine it with feedback until it’s a clear, engaging snapshot that supports your query letter and represents your novel well.
How Story Salon helps
At Story Salon, we help you break down your novel’s core to craft a synopsis that feels true to your story and clear to agents. Through guided feedback, you learn how to tell your story’s essence with confidence and focus.